A bloody dawn on Fenris

Hrothgar watched the battle camp that lay at the foot of the snowy hill. The situation was rapidly deteriorating for the invaders, not accustomed to frozen soil and climatic conditions of Fenris: The storm that raged for three days did not allow the enemy to move forward as planned, unable to move into the desert and inhospitable moor what is Asaheim, their artillery useless in the middle of the blizzard. Meanwhile, the explorers of the Great ompany of Hrothgar had continually made ​​incursions into hostile camps, with each attack silencing a key component of the opposing army: a
radar antenna, a makeshift bunker in container supplies, an entire fleet of four Predator ... at each explosion the enemy came out holding their weapons but the only thing that the sensors could pick up in the smoke of the explosion and blizzard was the guttural and wild laugh of Wolf's forces retiring after bringing havoc and destruction.

At the dawn on the third day Hrothgar had met his Company and had conducted a deadly attack in the heart of the enemy. The Long Fangs and Predators, guided by the experience of the Veteran Sergeants had devastated the armored vehicols and shells which could be harnessed to repair: a tremendous firestorm, followed by the Thunderwolf Cavalry charge that is easily wedged into the army of the invaders killing any enemy in front of him parasse, ripping limbs and
heads with their mouths bristling with teeth, tearing them down with power fists and knives frost. On the trail of blood left by the Wolves had entered Grey Hunter's teams, disembarking from their Rhino and spewing a torrent of fire.

Now the leader was watching the outcome of a perfect battle directed towards the final victory. "You will regret it
bitterly for having defied the Sons of Russ, to have attacked them in their home ... you will pay with your lives," he thought bringing down the hammer on the head of an opponent on the ground who wah trying to lift the requiem against him. Around him his Wolf Guard was ending to eliminate the remnants of the attacking force that tried to attack directly the general, teleporting behind its unity and believing that they catch him off guard and being instead rather
face a dozen snarling figures with smell of wet dog that had wiped it out in few minutes. Only one of them remained standing: a giant struggling with the typical brutality of the deamon who serves Ahriman, swinging his sword, and by the time he could hold off his Guard. Wielding the hammer Hrotgar slowly walked to the monstrosity of chaos and ordered to the Terminators to step aside. The beast stood for a moment, panting, then looked at the Lord with eyes bloodshot from which permeated a strong desire of blood: a wicked grin twisted his face consumed by chaos, then it bursting into an
evil laugh. The two contenders began to spin in circles, swinging their arms, Hrothgar in absolute silence, the beast growling and screaming. "Just like that .. just us two, and our weapons, lousy dog," brought up the Demon Prince of the Thousand Sons. Hrothgar stood in silence for a moment, then a feral grin painted on his face: "And my Thunderwolf ...»
The Prince stopped in turn, surprised, finally feeling the hot breath on his neck and a savage growl and see a huge dark shape claw at his throat, before he died.

bel racconto, l'hai scritto tu? Lupi Siderali contro Stirpe dei Mille é uno scenario che mi é sempre piaciuto, soprattutto questo in cui un Lord Lupo su Lupone si scontra contro un Principe Demone

ho letto da qualche parte "thunderwolf" e mi è venuta in mente la scena XD per quanto riguarda la Stirpe l'ho scelta perchè nello sprue del Lord c'è un busto di un marine della Stirpe morto =)

molto bello. Perché hai scelto di scriverlo in inglese?

perchè "Thunderwolf" fa più effetto che "lupo del tuono"

ahahah...la scena del lupo è fenomenale...un tocco di classe inaspettato in effetti... XD

in realtà è il pezzo principale, ho scritto il racconto per arrivare a quello =)

bello bello bello

Carino, ma ci sono un po' di errori: qualche tempo verbale e il titolo saltano subito all'occhio
Complimenti per l'impegno comunque, quanto ci hai messo a scriverlo?

cos'ha il titolo che non va? cmq boh, un'oretta penso...

Che sarebbe stato "A bloody dawn on Fenris" se, come credo, avessi voluto dire "un'alba di sangue su fenris" (che in italiano suona maluccio XD )

lol, sbagliai, hai ragione =) ma vabbè, piccolo errore di scrittura

Nemo ha scritto:

perchè "Thunderwolf" fa più effetto che "lupo del tuono"

in effetti Thunderwolf è molto più figo

molto carino

Quanto è difficile capire questa regola?

thorhammer92 ha scritto:

Evitate comunque il necroposting, non si commentano discussioni di 5-6 mesi precedenti che non sono più "attive" o di interesse comune